My heart belongs to you. But you
can't realize that yet. I can
only belong to you, but you
don't know that I'm here.
I love you. You are my only light, my only
way home. I' hypnotized by you,
my redeeming light.
I'm trying to get you off my mind, but
it just wont work. I want to be with you, but you
don't want me. I'm sorry I am who I am, I wish I
could change, but it's just to hard.
I wish we could be together.
I hate living like this. Pretending
to be your friend when we should be
something more. Please say you love me
because I love you.
My heart's shattering because you
don't need me for anything more than
a friend.
Author notes
I wrote this because of the guy I like, but he doesnt like me...well this is really complicated, but I'm trying to find a way to keep my mind off of him. I like him...ALOT, and it hurts each day I see him at school and know it could never be. So here it is!
option:5
A contest entry
- Emotions Crying Out {Options} by newnoakua.
550 points, ended June 16, 2008, 91 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the title.
this was gorgeous.
I love the imagery it held me the second I started reading...great job and keep writing -
wow, wonderful! I can relate to this soo mcuh! It's raw and powerful! A great flow! It was like something I could have written... only good. Great job!
Best of luck in the contest! -
Powerful!
I totally understand, i wrote a poem similar to this a year ago, exactly! Just hang in there sweetie, I'll work out in the end. Great write it seems like a prelude to my own work!
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