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Into Existence

Into Existence

When lies encircle me

It burns away all but dismay

Pray for forgiveness to get me to stay

Flames engulf my heart

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  • Welcome to Allpoetry

    This is an interesting start you should definitely continue with it

    Welcome to allpoetry, enjoy
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  • You'll Get There!

    Heh we all try to make it into society, I do myself, I just cant seem to find anywhere to call home. As i soon as i start to settle, it all gorws brken and my heart is back to someones slave puppy. I've been brken, I ve been used, and I've been forgotten. But in time we all find are place, at home in the ocean of loneliness, some just sail and sail, some only sail the shores of its coast.

    Sincerely,
    Sir D.Wolf Tasagka