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+ Tears +

Your tears
Dripping down
Like heavy asteroids
Dashing in
From outer space...
Crashing into me


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Your tears - My pain

A contest entry

small droplets of water... saying so much

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  • paperbackwriter
    June 5, 2008
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    love it soo much great job

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    I like the tear and outer space images.

    Nicely done.


  • Perception
    May 21, 2008

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    Oh... Hehe... Different sort of impact -- but still an impact Excellent write... I really love the descriptions here.

  • paperbackwriter
    May 21, 2008
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    awwwwww i love it


  • danceswsquirrels
    May 21, 2008
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    this was so pretty in a painful way... goodluck! great impact!


  • Fantasy.Dreamer
    May 21, 2008
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    AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!

    Gio...this is good!

    I love it!!!

    Good Luck in the contest!
    ♥♥♥♥

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