Denied – failed to accept wisdom
…Obviously
Visibly…
Temptation
twisted into hallucination
merely mere mortal
mortality…
distended by aberrant desire
weakness, weakened
astray, forsaken - No, disserted
Lifeless swelling becomes alive
Vacant, internally deficient
Arrive then…
and die
A contest entry
- Pictured Inspired once more by whispernthedark.
775 points, ended June 7, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a great story from the picture. I love the responsibility forced upon them. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
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whisper
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thanks for your comment - and your time - our most precious commodity
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Interesting write here
Deeply defineing the prompt very well
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thank you for the time you took to read this piece - I appreciate your comments
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Wow, I am somewhat speechless, you handled this prompt quite well I think-good luck with it
lol
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thanks - I sometimes turn to the "dark side" muahhhaa
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Indeed you do hahaha but what you do upon arrival is what counts above everything...hahahaha wouldn't you agree?
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Pat, you're a genius! - I have re-read your comment
let's each pen a poem with the prompt "what you do upon arrival" - post it on your site and let me know when you're done (let's give it about 10 days) - who knows...
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