O it feels like Grace, amazing,
When I hear your voice
The smooth-coarse thunder, ethereal,
Love through vocal cords
O divine laughter, subtle serenity,
The place where we meet
The signs holding fast, watching,
Like lidless eyes would
O and that smile, honest,
Or at least I think
Open and inhale, captivating,
And I lose my keys
You, the uttermost, illuminating,
Blinding my own soul
And then you leave me, wanting,
No--I'm craving for...
A contest entry
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well its prettty, at times a little hard to follow but i love your use of words here and the flow was beautiful. it sounds like you know well the meaning of love, and theres a lot to be said for that, so thanks for entering and good luck!
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This has nice imagery. Good work, and good luck!
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This is really cool. It all flows together and I really liked it.^_^
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This is extraordinary!I love how the words flow!thanks for entering my contest!(ur the first one)GOOOOOOOOOOOOD luck!~
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Great use of words and the flow is remarkable :]
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This is rele good! You use a lot of rele great imagery and this poem is so sweet!
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