I hate my past to the extent
To cover up my past I'll vent
I'm sorry, really, through and through
I really dont know what to do
I dont know how to say this right
And when i dont, I'll pick a fight
But every day, I missed again
And got remorse, back even then
Was young and brash and crazy too
And then look what I'd go and do
I'm sorry though, I cant get why
I cant get over this, oh sigh
I cringe, I wince, but I cant change
My past, my life, my hurt, my shame
If i can fix it, please do tell,
Relieve my concience and make me well
I dont know why I feel this way,
Perhaps its cause (I) want to repay
I wish I'd change, I really cant
I guess thats why I always rant
I'm sorry, friend, I really am
I'll try repair this if I can
Author notes
Carrie me think my grammar be much gooder on this one, you thinks?
I'M SO SORRY... you know who you are.
Improvements?
Comments
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Yay! It's very good. I like the rhyme and flow it's very poetic. But you NEED apostrophes!
So many cants and donts! *hehe*
~ Bright Smyles
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i like this call for help. it is very well flowing and i love the rhyming in it also.
good poem all together.
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