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Man or Not?

Dedicated to pleasing you
A poem doing what you, well
asked it to and stuff
Avoiding rhyme through evasive lines
It hates being identified
It's a person, is it not?

Author notes

Well, thirty words.

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    line two read a bit awkward to me, otherwise a cute piece.