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after daddy told daughter keep note, have if I die

peat moss crumbled
until poked
finger untiled it
to point out birth defect
possibility pace,







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good luck is not a great clue; Isaiah 65:11

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though plant/animal type I can wrap myself around

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    very well done.


  • Perception
    May 21, 2008

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    Very interesting... I love the descriptions... Though I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to say...
    Excellent write, however