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Not Supposed To

i'm not supposed to love you
I'm not supposed to care
I'm not supposed to live my life
Wishing you were there
I'm not supposed to wonder
Where you are or what you do
I'm sorry I can't help myself
Cause I'm in love with you!

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  • Nakatrea
    May 23, 2008

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    so cute! and sweet. well written too my friend. I liked it very much. Keep writing and stay on AP

    Kat!


  • shopaholica
    May 23, 2008
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    :)

    OMG I loveee your poem


  • Angelflower
    May 22, 2008

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hello funckymonkey ,

    This was a very well written poem.. Though this was short there was a lot of emotion in your words and you also created an image that is very sweet.. Your words flowed very well which is a really good thing because it's easier for the reader to be pulled into your poem.. Great write!!
    If you ever have any questions regarding the site please contact me or any other Site Greeter
    Keep up the great work!!


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    • funckymonkey
      June 15, 2008
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      Thanks,
      I really liked your adultress sin poem!
      It was kinda sad, scrath that it was really sad! but it was so good I wish I had written it!


  • kavi22
    May 21, 2008
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    This is a really cute poem! I love it!


  • broken bloody angel
    May 21, 2008

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    this is a very cool, small to-the-point kinda poem..
    its very well written.
    keep writing hun!1

    -Bella

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