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Do you see me now





Can you see me now; I am the furor from with-in;
You dare to tread on his life as if it were of no matter.
Now I will break you and fill you with a fear you’ve never known
I will terrorize your complete existence.

It is you with your carelessness that has released me;
I am his demon of revenge he has hidden and imprisoned.
You --now with your destructive ways;
Will not escape the full extent of my evil wrath.

Look again at the image; do you see it?
It comes not close to the debauchery I shall hurl on you.
And as your face sinks in from the draining of your spirit;
I his demon will pleasure in your cries for mercy; that will not come

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  • onesugar silver member
    May 30

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    I loved this from beginning to end...
    The ending clinching it for me...sent chills
    down my spine.
    Good luck in the contest
    ~sugar~