Seeing her he knew he had to talk
to her, as she stood on the edge of the bridge,
he had to talk to her.
She had to know that it wasn't her Fate -
had to talk to her.
Unsure of what to say, he knew he must say something.
He walked closely to her as she stood on the bridge
looking down at all the water.
"How do I help her?" he wondered as he approached her.
"What do I say? How can I take away her pain?"
He moved in silently, hoping for the proper words.
She heard his foot scrape the wet pavement as the cars rode on apathetically, and screamed, "I'll jump!!! You come any closer and I'll jump!!!"
He stopped in place. "Oh God, now what?" he wondered.
He heaved a huge, silent sigh and said, "Why do you want to kill yourself? Is it that bad?"
"They're raping me!!!" she screamed. She spared him a glance through her matted hair, the rain adding only more to its dampness.
"Who?" he asked, shellshocked.
"Come here and I'll tell you."
He walked over to her and said, "Who, hon. Who is raping you?"
She grabbed him by the head and he saw fangs and red eyes as she said,
"Nobody now!!!"
A contest entry
- Dark as night by Sound of Madness.
950 points, ended May 22, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
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wow this is so good no better yet its great
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pixy stix are my anti-drug
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Wow!!! I can really feel this liek being bitten!!!!!! I am speachless!!! Best of luck!
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you had it,
but...
lost it...
but I really do like the beginin'
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Hey! Stay in touch! - ocerus
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I liked the ending, I was kinda hoping for something like that. Didn't know she was a vamp and was thinking she might throw him off and laugh. Good job Oce.
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this poem is fucking sweet great ending vampires kick ass and you dont see it comeing damn!!
keep up the great work
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Wow, I was not expecting that ending. Thanks for entering my contest, and wish you much luck.
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