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Dredge

Ghosts hiss a litany of mistakes
as mongers carry souls from our bodies

trudging solemnly down moonlit halls
dredging up all these memories

Let me wander to my cocoon please

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 22, 2008
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    That first line is the best... gave me shivers.
    I want a cocoon too,
    Marlene

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    but there is so much outside that cocoon isn't there?