something brighter than clouds,
a child's face with hair more brilliant
to my eyes not worried crows go
long as she doesn't but like from womb
babies memories don't write
Author notes
good luck isn't for my lyrics of rejoicing; Isaiah 65:11
please comment pleasingly
without emoticons or applause symbol
though plant/animal types normalize my smile
A contest entry
- 30 words by Melissa Gayle.
400 points, ended May 22, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
seeing daughter intermixed with new pregnancy thoughts panorama of things
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Such happy expectancy - the memories are already beginning.
Marlene
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thank you for the actuality
marlene47 with no mere input
yes, there's research that isn't...
btw my daughter liked figuring out the answer of your number,
babies are my subject
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they may not write but they are made aren't they.
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hmhmmm
Melissa Gayle thanks for finding flow worth
that confirmation is a typed nod, one needed feedback.
these contests stack so quickly I forget to look at all results... but slowed as for or before walk lol --
babies are my subject
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