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you judge me but you dont know me

you judge me but you dont even know me.you judge me because of my shape or my hairstyle.you smile in my face but curse me behind my back.you judge me because my hairs to short or because of the people i hang around with.you judge me because i like attention or because of my outgoing spirt.why cant you see your just like me and im like you.maybe my hair aint as long or my clothes aint as cute but im like you.you judge me because i dont have sex or fuck every guy in the club.this world is taking over your mind.if your not this your that if your not cute your wack.im just like you, take away all this got damn glitz and glam and you'll see your just like me.you'll see if i show you in a different light.

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  • Suicide Hotline
    May 27, 2008
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    I thought that it was very creative and sounds personal.It was great!


  • iwantyoutoburn
    May 22, 2008

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    I like it.
    The lines may not rhyme but I certainly understand where you are coming from. Thank you for your comment on my poem. It's very much appreciated.