Every waking day
I still feel this pain
Within me
It feels like
This pain is here to stay
Lasting forever
It seems like it
Will never go away
Lost and trapped
Inside this empty
Place that I call "home"
No one understands
The pain and hurt I go through
Every day its the same
I lose someone close
To my heart
As I watch a piece
Fall into shattered pieces
Every waking day
I hope for the next day
To be a better day to
Put a smile upon my face but
It never turns out the way
I thought it would be
Instead I always have
A frown on my face
Rolling tears come down my face
Blood falls from my wrist
Hope is lost
I believe nothing
Will cure my pain
I'm falling deep
Into darkness
As I hold my only friend
In my hands
Its name is "razor"
Helps me feel better
When I cut myself deep
I'm living a nightmare
That I'll never get out of
I'm to weak to face it
I'm alone and gone for good
Author notes
this is how I feel almost everything
and its about my life
In a list
A contest entry
- Skeletons in the Closet? by XHollowXEyesX.
800 points, ended June 2, 2008, 24 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poems of pain. by Christina-is-crazy.
300 points, ended June 18, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awe =[
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I know how this feels. I think as a general passage in life about 50% of teenages feel this more than the other half, then again i think the other half just hide it to feel 'normal' what ever that means. I hope you don't feellike this anymore, or if you do that you have at least found a little bit of light to go towards.
Thanks for entering.
Laura. -
I see how long ago that you wrote this, and I hope that you don't feel like this anymore. I've been there, and it's not such a lovely place to be.
From reading this poem, I can tell that you used it to vent. Which is good. We all need to vent.
Good Luck in the contest!
- Aly -
Im sorry
if this is really you im sorry...i dont know how you hurt im not u i wont pretend to know. but what i do know is that in life we go through stages some...eternal that can make or break us...usually break...and i know how it feels to be truley broken....i feel it every day.all day.and if you need someone to tlk to who wont judge.im here.maybe someone who wont give advice?ill shut my mouth.what ever you need i want to help. i guess being there for other ppls problems helps me take my mind off my own. if you want ill give you my number.i dont mind.your poem is wonderfully written and touching..... well done. -
This goes in the long bible of sad and depressing things people wrote. every story is unique but depressing.
I love how vibrant your emotions were portrayed in this it was truly touching and amazing to read.
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this struck me to the core.
what a fascinating but sad story. this was excellently written. the emotion of it all really touched me... at the same time it made me want to reach out.
i sincerely hope you are careful with yourself dear. You have a tender and beautiful soul, one that shouldn't be skirmished by anyone or anything. take care of it dear, one day you may be someone's everything.
lovely.
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Amazing write<3
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It's a good write.
Really good flow to it... Expressed your self really well.
Thanks for entering.
Good luck
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This is a really great poem,
keep up the good work,
Thank you for entering the contest.
And good luck
♥ christina -
this is great! good job and good luck in the contest
xoxo- christina -
wow. what impact and power you have involved in this piece. The way you described the emotions that you are going through is so raw and powerful. It doesnt seem childish and overworked likemost on this topic. I love the flow that you used, I think you should add a couple full stops in some places, just to help break it up a little and allow the reader to be able to take a breath.
Beautifull write, so sorry for what you went through.
Thankyou for entering
All thebest
~Hollow~
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