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No, I’m not your rag-doll.

I have limbs.
I have blood.

I
have
a
heart.


A contest entry

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    This is strong in its simplicity.


  • PatheticKt
    May 22, 2008

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    Good write, we all might as well defend ourselves when we are treated wrong, all right
    I find this short piece powerful, indeed n.n

  • Virgoan
    May 22, 2008

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    sharp, direct and ripping...loved the brevity of this.

    keep sharing your gift.



    HENSLEY


  • Perception
    May 21, 2008

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    Ohhh... Very powerful... The ending really just hits you. Like. Stop messing with my heart. Awesome write you have here... Really wonderful!


  • sheltered
    May 21, 2008
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    Then she ripped your head off and laughed.


  • going nowhere
    May 21, 2008
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    EXACTLY!!!!!! love it!

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