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Painful Love

Cascading, bright waterfall
Soaking my thoughts
Begging me
To let you know
I love you.

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    A beautiful sentiment.

    Nicely done.


  • Perception
    May 21, 2008

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    Hmmm.... I love the waterfall... Though... It really made me think. I love the imagery in this one.. So pure and pristine.
    Excellent