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May 16 changing goodbye everybody

I was jostled myself
by daughter tumbling in


bed from canopy pole, your head on my leg

and I think of that rolling toy
with the ball sliding around wire,
as news has to gravitate



to play with sibling at belly
turn I'm without full force
of exquisiteness but squint
little girl needs stimulation of



Author notes

good luck isn't the ubiquitous spirit I want; Isaiah 65:11

please comment helpfully,
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wrinkling face can make smoothest elbow, excelling tucking day curiosity and who else

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    June 5, 2008

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    I like the originality of the way you have used the prompt... and the language/vocabulary that you have used is very fitting... thank you for entering this contest.

    Keep writing

    Polly