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My love, six-seeds

Everyday I get down on my knees and pray for my love, six-seeds

asking the Most High God to bless them to feel the words that I say

as I pray for their health, safety, and well being

I also ask that the positiveness of self they will continue seeing

I want them to know that my concern for them has never expired

I will do anything for them, from the limit to the wire

exercising agreeable desires, whatever is required

I'll go one step higher, continuing to inquire about my love, six-seeds

allowing them to see that I love, my love, six-seeds

 

For my love six-seeds, my six stars

I'd freestyle nine hundred and ninety-nine bars

in the light, in the dark,

igniting elements, causing intelligence to spark

while in my power

Transending space and time, erecting towers

of knowledge, wisdom, love, and understanding

 

Five Dimes and a Gee are my love, six-seeds

Without them in my life, I have no idea where my life would be

True indeed, I recognize and take heed

the Universal need for my love, six-seeds

 

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  • marciakay81
    May 25, 2008
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    wonderful write! thanks for the entry.


  • ennovy silver member
    May 22, 2008

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    Dynamic & Defined Art OF Pure Love

    This shows the motherly love pouring from your heart. The six-beautiful seeds are your life. You talent is awesome, your word pour over the readers souls like warm honey. Keep writing from your inner spirit, I feel your connection to your children in these words...Excellent poem...novy/Tia aquene


  • frownsnfreckles
    May 21, 2008

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    A brilliant flow to this, the rhyme and the rythmn are really good. Although this contains a lot of sentiment it isn't slushy or too soppy, but powerful & contains a lot of dynamism in the word content.

    'igniting elements, causing intelligence to spark

    while in my power

    Transending space and time, erecting towers

    of knowledge, wisdom, love, and understanding'

    A really strong piece about motherhood and it's wonderfully protective powers.