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Innocence of a New Life


baby's breath
so hot & sweet,
against my cheek,
porcelain skinned angel
hugs me tight.

delicate folds
remind you of
vulnerability
and you are left to wonder
what will happen?...



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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 22, 2008

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    For me the heart of the poem is in the second stanza... when it hits you, the responsibility you have.
    Marlene

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    hopefully only the good and true will happen.

    lovely piece.