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Out Of Reach

Like eyes that grope through thick fog
to search out a ship, prisoner of a dark sea
my dreams lie just over the horizon
hide from dawn's shining rays
out of reach.....

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 22, 2008

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    Visualize! And as if... act as if it were already here. Sometimes you have to be there first and then it well come.
    Marlene

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    but dreams are never completely out of reach, its just a sail away.