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Still Life


Still life
is born inside of you
You cry out in the night
as the crack affects you

Child of the times
remembers nothing,
as all the church bells
they shall chime

Ringing in your ears
of all that’s been lost
The crime of all time
well it always has a cost

Baby take a stand
take me by the hand
None of your loving words
shall ever fade to sand


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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    June 7, 2008

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    This is a really great take on the picture, I love your final stanza. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


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