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Kitten

kitten innocence
ignores dampness on my chair
looks for a new spot

A contest entry

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  • forever dreaming
    June 7, 2008

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    Very good haiku, a lot captured in so few lines. They don't seem to realise the havoc they can cause, do they? Geting up to all sorts of mischief then looking so innocent. Many thanks for entering my contest. Apologies for the delay in judging, have been ill.


  • crimsondew
    May 26, 2008
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    Aww...so sweet and cute...another excellent haiku!


  • individuality gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    ah the little spuddy cat, sleepy head bliss, they always want to curl up where you are when they are young then flip you a fin when older