I love a man who is so sweet,
I feel like he’s always there – even though we may never meet.
He’s become a father to this lonely soul;
When he’s around my sadness will never take its toll.
So much wisdom and caring to me he’s shown,
If I were a few years older – I’d steal him for all my own!
So hard it is to return all his blessings and favors,
For now, his sweetness, I shall just savor,
Because I know he is a man true to his word,
And I know that nothing I ever say to him will be left unheard.
Caring and willing to always be there for me;
How he has not a wife – bah, I just cannot see!
Although, if you asked me myself I’d say only this
He is so special, so sweet and so pure – I don’t think anyone deserves to permanently savor his kiss.
I deserve everything – he says – Aha! What a laugh!
Although when it came down to how I feel I’d rather have him speak on my behalf.
When it comes down to how highly I think of you –
You should know that all I say is true!
Your “Pretty Britty” I’ll always be
Until the day you just get plain sick of me.
Even when that day comes – know this Keith Drew;
I love you!
Author notes
It's a true storay - it is!
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And no matter what you believe Pretty Britty.
I will always keep you within my heart. -
Beautiful piece of writing. True brilliancy.
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Thank you Pretty Britty, you will forever be within my heart.
Merry Christmas! x
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this is GOOD!!
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GOOD
Awww thats sweet
i like it
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this i cute ^^ good job ^^
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Nicely done...
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A very fine tribute poem here, with some wonderful rhyme throught...a passionate and most lovely piece... bravo.. bravo... bravo...
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Wow...this was so beautiful...great job!
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This was a great tribute.
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Thank you, it was written for someone very close to heart.
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I can tell.
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Truth
This is beautiful. I love it how it just is so truthful and you are not ashamed. Which you should never be. Sometimes life gets hard and there is nothing that you can do about it. There are days when everthing will just fall apart and you won't know what to do, so I am glad to see that you have guide who will aid you in the storms near your future life.
Thank you for sharing this with me. It was amazing.
Have a great day.
God Bless.
~Only1love4ever
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