In the darkness lying, sleeping
my soul left me, it wandering, creeping
where it went spying, prying
I do not know as I lie here crying, dieing
it to return I am wishing, hoping
where and why wondering, waiting
I need to wake no more weeping
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired again by whispernthedark.
400 points, ended June 10, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like your rhyme scheme, nice flow. Great take on the picture, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
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whisper
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Welcome to AllPoetry
A wonderful first poem, I am pleased you have the hang of entering our exciting contests here on AP
Best of luck
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Stay safe
~Manda
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