Would you notice if I was not here?
(I cry alone)
A token child -
The final piece of your perfect life
(Now its complete)
but thats all I am -
Your party trick
Money is good
But I need love too...
Author notes
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Picture credit: Special Pleading by C B Barber
A contest entry
- PIF/10/40 by AliceinPoetryLand.
700 points, ended May 26, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Aww so sad and a strong statement on the raising of many children in today's society.
Thanks so mucxh for your entry.
Gaylene
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Wow---Interesting and unique take on the prompt!
Best of luck to you in the contest!!
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