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Jigsaw

Would you notice if I was not here?
(I cry alone)

A token child -
The final piece of your perfect life
(Now its complete)


but thats all I am -
Your party trick

Money is good
But I need love too...

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  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    May 26

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    Aww so sad and a strong statement on the raising of many children in today's society.
    Thanks so mucxh for your entry.
    Gaylene

  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 22
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    Wow---Interesting and unique take on the prompt!
    Best of luck to you in the contest!!