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Christmas time

Christmas time,
is the time to be Merry
Eating and drinking too much
leaving a bloated belly

Christmas time
is a time for lots of smiley faces
for thankfulness
and saving graces

To toast to all good things
with a glass of sherry
to watch the wizard of oz for the 1000th time
on the freakin telly

Christmas time
is not about recieving
it's for thinking of others
and all about giving

Christmas time
is a time to be thankful even when alone
because youve made another year in your hectic life
despite your accident prone

Christmas time is about prayer
being thankful cos your alive
for Jesus saved our souls you see
for you he took a dive

I thank you Jesus, I thank you lord
for what you do each day
sometimes I am an idiot
and I thankyou for looking the other way

So Merry Christmas everyone
to both young and old
love is all I got in my body
I hope it's there when I'm old

Author notes

ty for reading , Merry Christmas everyone  
Written December 23rd, 2003

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  • Tudor Rose
    February 28, 2005
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    lol Girl??? sorry hun I'm a guy :-o lol glad you liked it anyway and Im happy it made you feel warm inside


  • Frogzter gold member
    February 28, 2005
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    Oh I loved this one! It made me laugh and warmed my heart. The imagery and flow used here was wonderful. You go girl! Makes me wish it could be Christmas veryday! lol


  • Frogzter gold member
    February 28, 2005
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    Oh I loved this one! It made me laugh and warmed my heart. The imagery and flow used here was wonderful. You go girl! Makes me wish it could be Christmas veryday! lol


  • smileywinks
    December 23, 2003
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    Thank you for sharing this lovely write! And so very true, in each part!
    I loved the way this flowed so well!
    And memories I just had!
    I thank you for that!
    Good luck in my contest, I'm trying hard to complete!
    They're a lot of these enteries!
    XOXO Veronica