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embracing time

time is going by so fast
everytime i glance at the clock,
another hour has gone by
minute by minute
i try to embrace my time
to hold it in my palms
make it useful, something that I will always remember
I can do so much in just one minute
I can say I love you or hello or even smile

The clock is still ticking rapidly,
even as I write this
time will never stop
even when we need it to

I sometimes wich time would freeze,
so I can go back and fix something
to say something differemt,
or just take it away

but time will always go on,
even when we are gone,
it will keep on going

time is never on our side
and even now I am wasting it
instead of embracing it

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  • HereComesTheSun
    May 25, 2008
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    amazing, haha nothing else to say but great/fantastic job