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Hurts More

Remembering the past
Hurts much more
Than forgetting about him
And moving on with life

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A contest entry

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    Hmm, interesting thought.


  • Perception
    May 21, 2008

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    So much said... So little time. How true... How true... What a life lesson said in these lines.
    Wonderful


  • danceswsquirrels
    May 21, 2008
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    oooo I like this one! Very strong!!


  • Breathless Ballons
    May 21, 2008

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    WOW, this was really good. You definetly made an impact- at least to me you did. I know how this feels, having to remember soemthing you wish you could forget. It feels almost as if remembering does not let you move; it does not let you continue living your life.

    Well, I hope you do goood in the contest, and thank you for publishing such a great write. *smile*