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Evoking The Tide

Fluid of grace
wanton waves
playfully trace
siren’s step
into seaweed wall
an ocean’s shawl

To dance with foam
under the beckoning glow
atop glittering loam

Shadow meet heel
rhythms breath I feel

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  • MysticalRayne
    May 23, 2008
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    Wonderfully done ~ rhyme flows smoothly ~ best of luck in the contest