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Soaring Grace

Shrill glory in flight
stroking feathery twilight
humbling, this sight

Author notes

"humbling" is shown to be 2 and 3 syllables according to different syllable count web sites. I am going with the 3 syllables on this one.

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  • Swan song gold member
    May 31
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    A hiaku that rhymes Awesome!


  • Perception silver member
    May 21

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    hmmm... Well haiku aren't suppose to rhyme -- I'm not a haiku expert so... Who cares
    I think it really works here.. This is really beautifully done.
    Wonderful