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Little angel and her furry protector

traveling fantasia's floors

beyond mother's prying orbs

in dream worlds.

 

Magic sphere tossed

becomes ball,

knocked pitcher off its stand

cherub praying

won't bring divine judgment

as mother warned,

while Rover watches for thunderbolts.

Author notes

Special Pleading by Charles Burton Barber

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    Oh wonderful! Love the last line. Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 22, 2008

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    "while Rover watches for thunderbolts."--Great Line!
    Very well done and best of luck in the contest!!