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New Birth

Caressed
Loved
Appreciated beyond worth
Beauty
Softness
All in one caress
Little arms
Little feet

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    May 22, 2008

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    Babies are truly wonderful little beings.

    The only thing (to me) was that this read a bit like a list.


  • Perception
    May 21, 2008

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    Awww... Very cute... I like this... It holds delicacy of what an infant would be. Wonderful job on this short write