I never realized how much I love you
Until the day you left me here
I didn't hold you love so true
As I held you near
Still you took a piece of my heart away
A piece no one can replace
You took you life that dreadful day
A choice you can't erase
You left me here all alone
You are the only one i love
Your death drove through me like a stone
Now you watch me from heavan above
Why did you knock at death's door
Was you life really that bad
I could have been there for you more
I would have held you when you were sad
We could have fought this together
I would never leave your side
I would have been there through all weather
You didn't have to hide
I thought secrets didnt happen
You know how much I care
This wasnt supposed to happen
This really isnt fair
My love for you continues to grow
My love for you is true
I just wish you could know
I never stopped loving you
A contest entry
- Suicide Solution by Blood Magick.
540 points, ended July 26, 2008, 79 entries
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Comments
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I really like this one. It's very emotional and very powerful. Good luck in the contest.
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Moving
This poem reminds me of deep feelings I've known myself. The lines, I could have been there for you, and I thought there were no secrets are something to which I can really relate, and you make your feelings most clear. The Title makes it quite evident that the loss left you feeling un whole. It was a fine poem, deeply moving. -
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thanx you somments mean alot to me. I do make my feelings known in poetry cause usually that is the only way I express them
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this is a poem for my BF who committed suicide. He was everything to me, and I do mean everything
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