Last night I asked you why you love me.
Shortly after you replied,
I love the way you twirl your hair when you're nervous,
How you chew on your lip tho it drives me crazy,
I adore those beautiful eyes,
My favorite shade of blue like the ocean after a storm,
You know that crazy calm?
♥♥♥♥I love you ♥♥♥♥
I just smiled and intently I listened on,
I love how you smile it just lights up my day,
Please don't ever leave me,
Please always stay.
♥♥I love you♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
I just giggled and said of course my sweetie,
I'll stay with you forever and ever and always and you said: and more,
You love the way I hold you close,
How I joke around in that loving sort of way,
When I speak too loud and you can't understand a thing I say,
Or my high pitched laugh like spongebob squarepants,
Which I like that show anyway,
How I cook you a good ol' fashioned meal,
And I take forever to make up my mind,
Then when I do how I change it only a thousand times.
Well, let me fill you in here and now,
The reasons I love you!
♥♥♥ I love you♥♥♥♥
I love you for your beautiful soul,
The way you smile from the side,
How not all of your teeth are even so it looks like some are missing,
The way you play with you hair in the mirror when you think nobodys watching,
And how you try so hard to be sneaky but I always know,
I love how you hold me close and I know I need noone else,
Or the way that you call me just some crazy lady,
And tho you won't admit,
You also chew on you lip,
And you're not always right,
Especially when we fight!
♥♥♥♥♥I love you♥♥♥♥♥
The way you stick out your bottom lip when I won't give you a kiss,
Or those old puppy dog eyes,
I love it when we lay down at night,
And you can't go to sleep without that last kiss,
And then how we say...
Goodnight
Comments
Comments
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How wonderful that you have found a love as good as this. A beautiful dedication to them, superbly penned


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In this line:
"When I speak to loud and you can't understand a thing I say,"
It should be "too" instead of "to"
Also, there's a few other errors in the poem, so you should read it through. It's mostly typo errors though.
A very sweet poem. I was captivated by the love and sweet words and just wanted to go awwww! Good job! -
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that was so sweet i wish my girlfriend would right me a poem like that or my boyfriend ether way i would always love it



