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Thunderstorm

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I stand alone in silence, the approaching storm is violent.

But for now natures at peace, all is still and Silent.

 

The winds now pick up steadily as oak leaves rustle and pine trees sway.

Blowing past my face gently, on the wind the songbirds play.

 

Nature falls in silence, except for the rustling cane.

The earth eagerly awaits the coming of the rain.

 

And on the breeze is carried the telltale of the coming storm.

The scent of rain reaches me and on the horizon clouds form.

 

Gentle thunder rolls now, like a train on the fly.

Lightning even now strikes lighting up the southern sky.

 

The clouds come on quickly with a steady unending approach.

Rolling on violently like an old western stagecoach.

 

The rains begin to fall, beginnings of a spring shower.

The final warning given before unleashing its power.

 

Heavily now the rains fall sending rivulets down my face.

The storm now surrounds me in a very wet embrace.

 

And still yet here I stand, water seeming to touch my soul.

Washing away my cares, it seems to make me whole.

 

The power of this storm, to experience is to imbue.

It just isn’t the same if you only sit back and view.

 

The storms still rolling on, away from the world around me.

And in its final parting rains, the world around I see.

 

Nature now has changed and all is fresh and clean.

The spring storm also bettered even what’s unseen.

Author notes

I went through a phase there for a while that I had no muse at all so I just wrote about the things I saw around me. I guess you could say that my world was my muse then. This is another one of those poems. the photo is one that I found online. This poem was written March 17th 2008.

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  • tarcus silver member
    June 21

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    Thanks for tidying it up.
    Another good tip is to try microsoft word document for spelling,It can also help with grammar though it is not so essential in my view for poetry.

    • Yes I Know I usually use microseft word to type up my poems but here lately I had just been using the spellcheck on here. thanks for the heads up though I wont make tjhat mistake again.
  • Amazing imagery. Please use spell-check though. I loved this poem. It was just so... Normal. It wasn't something you have to fight to understand, it was just what it is was. Excellent work.
    • Thanks. This one so was incredably easy because I wrote this poem while and after I was experiancing it. These type of poems are my favorite.
  • Hhhmm...I liked it..better than the usual heartbreaking depressing things you read on this site...I liked it much...the way the lines were set up also. Great write.

    • Nature is an awesome muse because as you look around you can really see the beauty in it. And Its much easier to put what you see into words than it is to put what you feel.

  • P0TEs wife
    May 21

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    again an amazing write. you continue to open my eyes to new ways of looking at things thanks to you i have evolved into a better writer. if only you could help my spelling
  • This was very beautiful, Danny
    I love how you can take imagery
    and put it to a whole other level and just make it wonderful!

    • Thanks you Brittany. Imagry is the one thing I do best. Its where my poetry is really at ts best.
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