As sure as the sun will rise - He loves me
He gave me his sure and gentle vow
As sure as the sun will set - He loves me
He wants me to trust and follow now
As sure as the waves will crash - he is there
He stands strong and protects me from harm
As sure as the thunder will roar- He cares
His embrace keeps me calm in his arms
As sure as the winds will blow - I love him
I'll give him body, soul and heart
As sure as the storms will come - I love him
Our worlds collide creating brilliant art
As sure as the moonlight will shine- I'm there
I'm grateful lonely nights are done
As sure as fiery stars will blaze - I care
We look to our future being one
A contest entry
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Comments
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beautiful rhyme. amazing flow...this is something many people can relate to.
thanks for entering.
good luck -
A splendid poem , very touching !
And rhyme & flow , excellent ...
Best wishes , Friend Easy
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awsome
wow this is a great poem
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Oh Wow
this is a beautiful write and i love the repetitions, it has a song feel to it and i can hear soft guitar and the surf when i read it, lovely -
wonderfull feelings hun
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Depth perception gone wild
Very sweet piece here anya, i like how you went from him to you..... i felt this one!
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As sure...
As sure as the rivers will continue to flow, as sure as this poem carries love to the brightest stars in the sky. Bravo Anya, this is preciously beautiful and a memorable tribute to the depths of true love. To hold love in your heart is one of lifes' greatest gifts, but to know sure as the sun will rise that he loves you too is just what all of our dreams are made of.
As sure as this poem is Outstanding, as sure as I will return and read more of you.
Great Job! ;)
Ron *wolf*
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Amazing write I can see the contentment in your piece and the love expressed in this piece is remarkable thank you for entering the contest!
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Amazing write I can see the contentment in your piece and the love expressed in this piece is remarkable thank you for entering the contest!
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Love is Great
Each line was full of emotion. It presents itself as how a loving relationship should be. I like that the most about this one. Did you a great job. Take care.
~Nicky
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Timeless
Ah.. Love ain't it grand! What a beautiful poem to celebrate love. Good rhyme and flow.I haven't heard from you in awhile, How are you?
Regards,
Jennifer
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Simply gorgeous!!! You make me long to be a romantic and take a chance on the beauty of love...Wonderfully done and best of wishes here...
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Awesom I likes it lots and it sounds alot like the first thing I ever wrote.
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This is quite good melody for a song, and for that, I have to say, it was a thrill to read, hoping that many others will fall by the way side so, that you stand a chance, thanks for the entry.
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Beautiful
Sounds like love everlasting . Beautiful flow and peaceful after taste. -
this is the mose beautiful, love write i've even seen, it seem romantic and out going, u thought outside the box, and thats cool lol
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This is a great piece...very welll sid.
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beautiful
i love the rhythm of this with repeats of the as sure theme o.o its like a song that sings itself to you
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Detailed and eloquent. Smooth on the tongue and pleasing to the mind. Very good job here. And as sure as the sun will rise, you will write again.
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Very abstract
I love the structure, rhyming is on point. Soft...feels like your heart is crying. 4 lines, 4 stanzas, get your point across effectively without over writing. 8/10
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Wonderful write,very loving and emotional.
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Beautiful wonderful real emotion good luck
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this has nice structure and a nice flow, i like this it is emotional and the over all meaning is wonderful best of luck in the contest
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Wow, quite a turn around from the first few of your poems I read. This new hopefullness ir refreshing. The repitition helped hold the beat. I look forward to your continued improvements. Very, very good poem.
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Thats was really good. I like it.
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thank you for the entry this is a nice write.
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i love this poem. it makes me feel hope. hope in love and in life. i think anyone who's down about love should read it. it's just that amazing.
thank you
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hmm, I'd say an improvement over previous writes, the rhyme was done rather well, didn't sound forced, flowed nicely. Personally I'm not a fan of the subject matter so I wasn't really enthralled in the poem, but from an objective point of view it was good. When you can bring someone into your work, regardless of what it is your talking about, thats when you know you've reached that level you're searching for, so keep at it.
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exquisite
having beauty; having qualities that give great pleasure or satisfaction to see, hear, think about -
Wow this is great... it truly is, i love the flow
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Aesome poem mom i really love it
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wow sis this is awesome. u know how i feel about ur writing its just as amazing as ur art. i love the flow and the imagery. love it. ~brook
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Beautiful
This is a well written love poem. It has a beautiful flow that comes from the heart. I would get rid of the contractions, as they weaken your work. Ex: 3rd stanza line 2 I'll change to I will. 4th stanza line 1 & 2 change I'm to I am. I believe you will see the difference. These comments are meant to help you and not be critical. Keep Writing
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TKO
TKO= TOTAL KNOCK OUT, Some mma words for ya! Anya this is so beautiful and well written. It's pure and so heart felt. I think this is my favorite write. The flow of this is breath taking. There is a sense of just over all calm in this write, like be able to breath. I see ocean in your future
Love ya sis
Christina
LDG 626
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Amazing
omg i am like in love with this! This is sooo good. Great job!
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Bravo!
One of the most beautiful, inspiring, & hopeful poems I ever read. Fine job, sis.
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if i was capable of crying, then that would bring a tear to my eye. but as you know...im not lol. but it was a great poem to read, simply because everything flowed together. great job, anyaz. keep it up.
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This is a great write, really seems to come from the heart. It's totally expected out of you hence your an awsome writer, well keep up the great work. I look forward to read much more from you.
Kristen
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extremely well presented, well writen, nice structure, nice pace, very comfortable to read, flow is constant thru out, and some nice imagery, all in all anya i would have to say this is the best you've written
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True Love,Beautifully written,seems straight from the heart.
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