Motionless.
Just standing there.
Passers by look,
some even turn their heads
to see if you show any emotion.
They want to see if they can help,
if you would just give some sign of
helplessness.
Glazed, misty eyes look straight on.
Like a robot, I'm waiting for some kind of
instruction, or reason to move.
A contest entry
- Big Challenge, Big Points by McRae by nature.
1500 points, ended June 5, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think!
Comments
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lol this is so cool ..its like your just being in a moment in time.standing watching observing then waiting for soething to happen....good write..
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I have not linked to the contest, but had no need to as this spoke to me. Intense emotions flow from this. Excellent and good luck.
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Great piece. This was very original and interesting. Thank you so much for joining in my contest. Can't wait to see how it all works out.
Much Love
Carrie
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