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Scolding





Crying about being scolded,
the only fault of not doing studies,
want to play further, but
fearing, teacher will too, tomorrow,
punish as well as mom howling.

Lucy does not understand anything,
puzzled to watch, search for sympathy.
















Author notes

~spiritualangel~

Picture Prompt
Special Pleading by Charles Burton Barber

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Comments


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    Aww really sweet. Your words fit the picture beautifully.
    Thanks so much for your entry.
    Gaylene


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 22, 2008
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    Great take on the Picture
    Very well done and best of luck in the contest!!