a flowing trickle of crisp
green leaves to play softly
in a gentle sway wind while
white buds tightly promise
a new beginning and less
familiar chivalry
Author notes
prompt: flowering vines (choose)
27 words
A contest entry
- PIF - three of my favorite things by tara wilson.
1200 points, ended May 22, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Honeysuckle is an enigmatic plant for me...It evokes the deep south , with all its contrdiction, charm and mystery.This is a window for me to a place that I've never been to but is still strangely familiar.
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I like this...it makes me think that each bud is an unknown...we don't know what will be..in that sense is a from of braveness & chivalry by opening ...very nice spin on the prompts..bringing in your own message & ideas with my prompts...lovely..thanks so much for entering my contest
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