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Pheonix of Ash

Ashes of the fallen, lost hope in charred form
    Carried by the lunar wind, in the nightly sky, in hunt for new life
        Screaming for a heart who’s flame can take the remains and make it more

A dreamer sits in the night
    Starring at the eternal sky, dreaming of light
        His heart calls out to the sky, screaming pass peace to all

Ash  and Flame called out, each echoing into the other
    Lunar wind shot forth, overcoming the dreamer in the fallen dreams
        His flame’s hunger grew, as he was devoured by charred remains, fire overcame him

What was once two entities, now is one
    The flame had merged with the fallen dreams, reformed spirit
        Though the body remains the same, the soul is new, transformed,

A phoenix is one born from ash, as this one was born
    Born of the ash of fallen dreamers, and the flame of this man’s heart
        Phoenix of Ash, his new soul is formed, the light of dreamers, the light of those with hope

The man now could not simply live the way he was before
    His old passion for peace was ignited into an inferno, blazing like the sun
        The new being inside forces him to bring light to those in the dark, Bringing hope to the damned

In the dark, in the night, more souls shine with him
    These souls fire’s gift the Phoenix with a part of their light
        While the ashes of their dreams and hopes, they meld into the fire bird, growing more powerful

Now a carrier of more, the dreams turn into a giant inferno
    Yet not a flack of skin burns of them, for this heat is not one of mortal land
        The weak sparks no longer flickering in the wind, the bird engulfed them, fed them hope restoring flame

The eternal night sky calls out to him,
    The desire to bring out the sun, light for them all
        Brighter then any moonlight or twilight the darkness could offer

Dreams of light fed into this mortal man, just another boy like anyone else
    Yet the light inside, the compassion, the love and the fire make him have the power to hold the Phoenix
        Hope of mothers, Hope of brothers and Sisters, hope of fathers burn into him, Now was the time to fly

So many flames, so much hope and dreams
    The amber transcended into glory Golden light
        He shot into the sky, Gold was needed in the air, to free the damned

Tears rain down to the world below as the Phoenix of Ash ascends
    The blaze of the dreams follow suit, soon the sun would be in the sky
        In the climax of the sky, right before the gravity of the world is no more, here and now

To bring hope to all below, at any cost to him
    That was the core of the Phoenix, no of the dreamer’s heart
        Light would break, leaving the dusk a memory till the next night, yet never eternal again

Each of the flames that followed shot into him,
    The ashes burned away into oblivion, the end was here
        The fire bird, the beacon of light was no longer a body but becoming just a giant flame
All the citizens upon the ground gazed unblinkingly at the sky
    Eclipsing the moonlight, a fire that had shape roared losing  form
        An orb in the sky that was once a bird, no longer alive, yet in return the greatest gift is born

A great orb of fire, of light and of hope
    The daylight had returned, the damned no longer that way
        But the cost was great, a soul lost to the flame in order to save…(Pause here for dramatic effect)

Wait the dreamer still lived, gazing up at the sky
    The dreams of his brothers and sisters cause the Phoenix to separate before they both became no more
        The sun had returned, the dreamer was still living, and light had filled life, Thanks to the Phoenix of Ash

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