silence, suffocating
not a sound
enticing imagination
but the wind picks up
tracing remnants
of a long lost
love of past
embracing heartbeat
the only sensation
filling empty words
unheard
falling through
hazy admiration
unescaping
infatuation
living for
tomorrow's gray
to rise and see
another day
Author notes
this was really fun. GREAT idea for a contest! i really appreciated the challenge also ^^
A contest entry
- Big Challenge, Big Points by McRae by nature.
1500 points, ended June 5, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Stun Me by realism-vs-romance.
600 points, ended May 27, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great piece. This was brilliant and your line was perfect. Thank you for being the first to enter my contest
Much Love
Carrie
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