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never is a promise

I've never locked eyes from across the room
I've never loved a stranger.
I've never kissed a broken boy.
I've never fought with danger.

and I have never been in love,
and I never ever will.
But never is a promise,
and never never kills.

The earth will never fade,
and leaders will never rise.
Life will never flourish,
and love will never die.

I have never been in love,
and I never ever will.
But never is a promise,
and never never kills.

Friendship never dies,
and eternity never ends.
But never is a promise,
and look how never bends.

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  • Ryno
    November 16, 2008
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    not feeling it
    ~prewrites, come and get them

  • Tefnut
    October 25, 2008

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    This is really good
    and sad
    which adds to the good
    I can understand these words
    and I like the use of the
    "forbidden"
    word
    Never

    Good job on this.


  • Misery into Melody
    May 21, 2008

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    hey this friendship will never die.
    i looooove you.
    marry me?

    sounds good.
    mineminemine.
    so chris can go fuck himself.
    (:

    love this. with a passion.


    • Emm Jayy
      May 21, 2008
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      *static* you're breaking up *static*

      hey, no. he can't. and this isn't a poem about him. It's just a poem. =]

      yay! a good passion? a passion that burns deep within your loins? wait, Court, it's not supposed to burn down there...