you lay me down on a bed
of vicarious pleasure
while lust whispered
on silver clouds
touching passions
not yet explored
your mouth sought truths
on nipples erect with want
meandered slowly past
a torrent of emotions
to pause at nature's wonder
your manhood pulsated
in urgent fingers
feeling honesty
rise with passion
ivory thighs trembled,
welcoming all of you
in unison we rode stars
of carnal pleasure
reaching for the summit,
a plethora of fireworks
exploded across the moon lit sky
stillness reflected complete,
as silent words of love fell
on salt stained lips
Author notes
Prompt ~ Making Love Under The Full Moon!
In a list
A contest entry
- Under The Moon by SummerlandRayne.
643 points, ended May 30, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Jeez thats pretty much amazing! No lie.
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Well.....speechless! 
Love, C P.S So will he be!!!!! LMAO
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Love it.
I wasn't expecting it when I came here, but I liked it a lot.
Passion was the best word for that!
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Lovely...such quiet beauty in this poem. I enjoyed a feeling of serenity as I read these words! Beautiful...thank you!
Az
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