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Confusion

Confusion
My confusion
Is giving me an allusion
Of everything being alright
Of us not being in this fight

What happened to the days?
When everything was praise
When I could see you again
When things would not end

I’m confused
Everyone is amused
I’m lost
I need you
To come to the rescue

Lord, the devil has almost won
But I know you have just begun
Help me praise you again
And this time I hope it never ends

By: Brittany

Author notes

I wrote this poem yesterday and a friend said i should enter it so i am

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  • Mrs. Moretti
    May 21, 2008
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    Wow.

    One thing- "allusion" should be "illusion". But I love this poem.