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[ left to be nothing ]

left to be nothing
you shattared my dreams
for what but nothing
or so it seemes

 

you could not wait

so you made your choice

you traded for lust

my loving voice

 

I hope your happy

as I am sad

 

I hope you'll meet

the one you seek

someone

just like you

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  • Cat10
    May 22, 2008

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    awwww!!! I love this poem!! made me want to cry...really. great job again! and bestest luck in that contest you're entered in!


  • Rachel21
    May 22, 2008
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    this is somewhat sad. i like how theres no hatred in the poem or regret.