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Are angels seductive?

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Are angels seductive?
This angels eyes are so innocent
Yet, so inviting.
And her searching eyes...
They are a mystery too!
And her beauty unclothed...
How divinely attractive.
She is almost a dream...
Real but not
And her wings...
They make her beauty more unique
She looks like a human butterfly,
But
She's seeking a differnt type of flower
She's seeking a true love
To spread her nectars wihtin..
And if the are as sweet as her beauty is,
Oh, how I wish...
I were the lost flower she seeks.

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    June 3, 2008
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    Intendity contest

    Thanks for your comment on my poem in your contest adn for the honorable mention..


  • notallowedtocry
    May 21, 2008
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    I like how it is so seductive and unsure like crush you have on someone XOX


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 21, 2008
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    Aww... a little bit of seductive in there and a little bit of sweet longing at the end!!