becoming undone
nothing said
nothing sung
thoughts to be thought
battles to be won
i only listen for meaning
nothing full
nothing done
the truth
that me must face
is that some must lose
this human race
A contest entry
- Whatever..just make it good. [astonish me] by borrowing.moonlight.
1000 points, ended June 30, 2008, 160 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think in general? Improvements?
Comments
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great job...again! ugh, you're so much better than me...I envy you so much, grr! but, yes, powerful and wonderful once again!
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That was very short, but packed full of power and meaning!
Good write.
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