My friends all annoy me
Taunting and teasing
There's nothing I can do
No way to stop them
I don't know how to cope
I don't know what to do
Anger and Frustration
Both I must give into
As the blurring of words
Shoot into my mind
Slowly destroying
The little that is left
Of my weak self-esteem
Author notes
My first free write!...the title doesnt match the poem very well...but oh well.....
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These people are your "friends"?
Sound more like bullies who want someone to look down upon to me.
I have a pretty shit existance, but one thing in it that I have to make the times a little smoother are my friends.
Mayhaps you should burn all bridges and serve any ties to thes aquaintences of yours and seek out people who truely like the you inside of you (the you behind all the walls of bleak and melancholic distain, that is, the real you).
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i can relate to that. i never know what to do because they are my friends and even though they are hurting me for some reason i dont want to huet them
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This is awesome. Very deep and again, I relate to it. Bullying sucks!
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I love the idea of it, and the flow is pretty good. Great job for you first free write!
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Ok this was good for your first free write great job!
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