He's about to explpode...emotions over-rode,
Never in tone, feeling alone,
He's not,
I want to tell him how to live,
Tell him what to be,
Teach him of the good side,
Ask to be friends with me,
The Alone;
Always unwanted,
Frequently disowned,
Always seeking,
Never shown,
Kyo-N;
I can't help farther than this site,
Though i'd like to help bring you light,
I want to hear you out;
To bring you in,
Rid you of hurt,
Please reply with a grin.
Kyo-N - An Inspiration.
A contest entry
- Social Phobia by U.g.l.y..
900 points, ended June 5, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
(Dark_rocker_angel at Photobucket.com - the pic) Kyo-N, a guy who I very much can relate to, he's the inspirer though.
Comments
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I'll be honest. Your poem is great and all the like, but for some reason I can't find an answer right now. I don't see what inspires you from me, so right now I think I don't deserve this poem. However... we'll see later.
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this was beautiful dominic, showing how caring you can be
i hope you do well in the contest but more importantly raise Kyo-N's self-esteem...xxxx
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This is such a lovely poem.. offering a hand to someone... shows a giving and strong spirit!!
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